添削|correction

平凡な高校生が書いた「後藤」の書を、書道の先生に添削してもらった。その際に先生と生徒の使用材料を逆転させ、生徒には朱墨で、先生には黒の墨汁で書いてもらった。
テロ報道で目に焼き付いてしまった黒とオレンジ色のイメージを、そのまま書道に転用した。
報じられた犠牲者の中には、私と同じ苗字を持つ日本人ジャーナリストがいた。

I asked a calligraphy teacher to correct "Goto" calligraphy written by ordinary high school students.
The materials used by the teacher and students were reversed, and the student write in red ink and the teacher in black ink.
In this work, I used the black and orange images that were strongly remembered from the daily terrorist reports.
Among the Japanese victims reported on the terrorist broadcast, there was a Japanese journalist with the same name as me.